do you want to be part of this?--my book, that is

I just had a bright idea--- well I think so. How about you read my book, chapter by chapter and act like my editors and proof readers. Perhaps you can suggest threats to the plot. Just add the 'corrections and ideas in the comments section so we can all see and keep it transparent. When it publish it or eBook it later, I can ackknowledge those who have had a paert in 'The River Always Flows. Hell, you may even want to think about the titlle and a cover.
Whats in it for me--- not alot at this stage.